As this is our first draft there are some improvements that need to be made which is included in the feedback. But overall our anamatic successfully displays our film in a rough way. However a shot that was hard to portray in a drawing is shot 10, a especially long shot in our anamatic as it a shot of a 360 degree view spinning and it was hard to capture that accurately in a drawing however it is annotated on our storyboard. It was hard to get the timing right for our anamatic as the still sketches aren't as effective as a moving image, we may need to include some transition effects into our anamatic to enable it to have a moving image effect.
Feedback for anamatic:
- The inverted images were very effective.
- A wide variety of shots were used.
- However, too short, we may need: longer shots
- Missing titles: actors and actresses, the title of film, cinematography, editor, sound, producer, director.
- Diegetic sound is needed
- The pace of editing is good, a good sense of continuity.